the sands of time is a fantasy interactive fiction where you play as a mage in Aiolos, a continent at the crossroads of the mortal and spirit realms.

current demo: prologue, 17k words total: the incident that prompted your exit from the capital.

updates and asks on my tumblr

Features:

Decide whether the accusations of treason that forced you to leave the capital have a basis in truth.

Meet five companions  (one male, two female, one nb and one selectable: either male or nb) and choose to pursue romance, friendship, or rivalry.

Navigate a world of complicated politics, spirits that frequently won't stay dead and magic that permeates everyday existence. 

Choose your name, pronouns, gender and place of origin.

Pick which area of magic you are strongest in, out of four (warding, enchantment, healing and transmutation).

Companions: 

Jasper (m) :

A familiar face from your past, and not one that you expected to see again. He's a snarky, obsessive researcher into spirits and, during your time in the capital, your closest companion. After getting caught up in the incident that provoked your rather abrupt exit, you presumed him to be dead, and he you.

Leonora (f) :

The owner of the alchemists shop next door to you in Kemorlen. Despite her saving your life (numerous times) and helping you to create a new life for yourself there, she remains a figure that you know surprisingly little about. She's blunt, impulsive, skilled with a sword, and definitely hiding something. All in all, you don't quite know what to make of her. 

Augustine (nb) :

A quiet, unassuming healer who arrived in town shortly after you did. Surprisingly squeamish and possessing a dry sense of humour, they have quickly become indispensable in helping you deal with the everyday magical difficulties of Kemorlen. Their past remains a mystery to you, and you suspect there may be more to them than first appears.

Mira (f) :

A charismatic bard who wanders the roads of Aiolos collecting stories, gold, and animal companions after being exiled from her home kingdom. She seems to attract trouble, but as long as the resulting chaos makes for a good tale she doesn't appear to mind. 

Theodorus (m/nb) :

A spirit with patchy memories and a thirst for revenge after being accidentally brought back from the underworld. They're awkward, restless and struggling to reconstruct a life for themselves in a world where they are supposed to be dead.

StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.6 out of 5 stars
(13 total ratings)
Authorcorvusasteris
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsDark Fantasy, Fantasy, Text based
Average sessionA few minutes

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I really like your writing style. And god bless you for making this mobile friendly. I have two suggestions.

  1. This is purely aesthetical, but I didn’t like the font. Helmet looks too aseptic and industrial, and it’s even worse justified. Not the best experience for reading, specially fantasy. You can’t go wrong with the classics, Times New Roman, Helvetica, or Georgia.

  2. Move the notifications to the bottom and make it last longer. The notifications show when you turn the page and the reader’s eyes is at the bottom of the page in that moment. When I noticed the notification it was too late, it was gone. I literally missed all of them.

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wow i enjoyed this story ^^

thank you !

your welcome ^^

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It's seems interesting. The only problem I had until now is the stats check. For example in the end of the demo it require a magic check, and even though I have 68 in magic, the check failed. Then i go to the stats, get back to the game and then the stat check is a sucess? Could you check that? 

Overall, the story has good potential and I wish you the best

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thanks ! the stat checks use a dice mechanic so it isn't a guaranteed success - I think the dice re-roll when you navigate back to the page which is what caused it to change from failure to success.  I'll try look at a way for it not to re-roll on navigation: thanks for pointing it out. 

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Enjoyed the demo and very excited to meet Theodorus. Lol gimme a grumpy spirit to romance and I'm happy ♥️

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thank you ! you'll meet him in chaper 1 so not too long to wait :)